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PostSubject: Eclipse   Sun Dec 21, 2008 10:27 am

Eclipse



Characters
Tammy Bullet

Hair: Brown Silky Long Hair
Age: 15 years old
Eye Color: Dark Brown
Skin Color: Tan
Personality:A nice, caring, loving teenager

Talia Bullet


Hair: Short and curly Dark Brown (looks like black) hair
Age: 5 years old
Eye Color: Dark green
Skin Color: tan
Personality:A funny, intelligent, and nice little girl


Jack Conner


Hair: Brown
Age: 16 years old
Eye Color: Dark blue
Skin Color: tan
Personality:a funny, athletic, charming teenager

Logan Light

Hair: Blond
Age: 16 years old
Eye Color: Light Brown
Skin Color: tan
Personality:funny, caring, nice teenager

Kayla Rich

Hair: Curly long Blonde
Age: 16 years old
Eye Color: Light Blue
Skin Color: tan
Personality:selfish, flirting,popular, failing, careless teenager

Ethan Rich

Hair:Short blonde
Age:17 years old
Eye color:blue
skin color:tan
Personality:selfish, athletic, and everything like kayla


Jessica Ella
Hair: Short black
Age: 15 years old
Eye Color: light green
Skin Color: tan
Personality:humorous, annoying, following teenager

Officer Kim

Hair: Orange very short hair
Age: 42 years old
Eye Color: Purple
Skin Color: tan
Personality:strict, caring, smart police officer

John Bullet (Tammy's dad)

Hair: Black
Age: 50 years old
Eye Color: brown
Skin Color: tan
Personality:sweet, caring, loving dad








Introduction


It was a cold winter night and wind was going crazy. The windows shook and woke Tammy up. Tammy, who was too up and about to go back to sleep went out of her room and into the kitchen. The smell of smoke frightened Tammy as she took a glass of milk out of the fridge. She looked outside and saw that the sky was red and orange. She thought she was having a dream and smacked herself in the head a couple of times and ran to her parent's room.It was locked.She started crying and ran into Talia's room to get her out of the house. Tammy picked Talia up and as she did there was the sound of something burning.She ran out of Talia's bedroom and saw that the fire was approaching her house. She jogged to her parent's door again and right as she was going to bang on the door, the door opened."RUN TAMMY RUN!!" shouted her father."YOU HAVE TO GET OUT OF THE HOUSE, A WILDFIRE IS APPROACHING AND YOUR MOTHER IS STUCK IN HER CLOSET RUN AND GET OUT OF THE HOUSE!"shouted her father once again. Tammy, listening to her fathers comands ran out of the house into an open sandy field where the sand couldnt catch on fire. She placed Talia down and watched the fire approach the house. "stay here" screamed Tammy to Talia. TAlia nodded and TAmmy ran towards her house."DAD MOM"Tammy screamed. She got to her front door and juerked it open. Seeing the fire inside Tammy was going to turn back but she stopped when she saw her father running through it coughing."DAD WHERES MOM?!?!" tammy shouted, but as tammy shouted those words fire came up to her and burned her hand. Tammy pulled back and held her hand with her other hand.She helped her father get out of the house and led him to Talia.As they approcahed Talia,Tammy's father said "Tammy, Talia your mother...." he paused for a second "your mother she couldnt get out, i tried to help her i really did,but it was just too late" tears roll down all of their cheeks as they watch the house burn to pieces. Meanwhile...... The robber laughed as he threw another cigarrete, still lighted into a tree and watched the tree burn tp pieces. "THATS WHAT YOU GET POLICE OFFICERS, YOU MESS WITH ME Y-" the drunk robber fainted and fell to the ground stuck in the fire.The wind blew the fire away, not touching the drunk robber and he lays there motionless.


Chapter 1: Life For The Bullets

Tammy walks to the river and washes her face. Talia runs behind her and almost rolls down to the river."Talia!!"Tammy screeches. Tammy runs to the river and grabs Talia by her t-shirt."Oh Talia.... you had me worried sick!" Tammy says.She picks Talia up and walks back to their hide-out on the streets.Tammy jumps back when she sees that their dad is home. Tammy runs with Talia in her arms towards their father. "dad! how come your home?" Tammy asks him curiously."Well Tammy I have to tell you something..... my job, its not doing so well so my pay-check went down..." He looks down shaking his head. "Life is just so hard right now" he grabs Tammy's shoulders to comfort her ,"but dont worry we can do this i promise." "Now i have to go back to work, i just had to get this" he shows Tammy and Talia the wrnch in his hand. "I know its not much but our work wrench broke so i had to come ALL the way home and now i have to go ALL the way back" he sighs. "i will see you two tonight" he kisses their fore-heads and walks off back to work. "Tammy why does daddy not like going to work?" Talia asks. "Well its not that he doesnt like it, but its a long way to walk from here to work,but life isnt prefect right?" Tammy hugs Talia closes. "Dont worry daddy said he promised that everything would be prefect"Tammy smiles."Now, what would you like for dinner? Fish or soup?" Talia answers "Fish!!!". Tammy nods and walks toward the river to go and fish for some fish.Tammy pipcks up a spear made up of saw-grass and stabs it into the water everywhere.Talia watches with interest.










Chapter 2: Bad News

Talia runs behind Tammy and pokes her on the back."Um Tammy" Talia says. "Not now Talia" Tammy says and shifts so Talia cant poke her anymore. "TAMMY!!!!! i think someones watching us" Talia points to a police car hidden behind a bush. "Oh my gosh, Talia get on my shoulders, we need to run" Tammy crouches down and TAlia gets on her shoulders.Tammy runs as fast as she can to get away from the police car. She hears sirens and hot tears start to sting her face.She hears a microphone saying "STAY THERE AND PUT YOUR HANDS UP". Tammy stops and puts her hands up. Talia does the same thing but waves her hands in the air."Tammy why did we stop?" Talia asks. She starts to kick Tammy's ribs. "Giddy up horsey! guddy up!" Talia yells. "Talia STOP we are in trouble and you need to act like good girl ok?" Talia says strictly. "OK" Talia says softly.An officer walks out of the police car and walks up to them chewing gum."You two come with me" She commands. Tammy loks up at her and sees her name tag. "Officer Kim... please we cant i have to wait until my father gets home and-" Tammy gets cut off my Officer Kim "ECUSE ME I JUST TOLD YOU TO DO SOMETHING AND I EXPECT YOU TO DO IT SO INTO MY CAR RIGHT NOW"Officer Kim shouts strictly. "Yes ma'am" Tammy says softly and takes Talia off of her shoulders.They walk into Officer Kim's car.When they arrived at the court Tammy saw her father there.She was hand-cuffed so she couldnt go anywhere.Talia ran to her father and jumped into his arms.Tammy walked down the aisle toward the seat in the court.She looks around at all the people and meets the eye with a boy.SHe stares at him for a minute and turns around shocked when she hears the judge's hammer bang on her desk."Officer Kim whats the problem this time?" The judge asks apparently annoyed."This young lady was wandering around on the streets in out local river spearing fish." Officer Kim explains proud of herself. "Oh really? Why were you in our local river spearing for fish?" The judge asks."W-Well m my family's house burned to pieces in a wild-fire and my mom died in it and now my dad has to work over-time at his poor job for us to survive" Tammy explains in a soft voice.She looks up at the judge."Well thats a pretty good explamation, but that doesnt mean you go into our river and spear our wild-life fish! you should tell our police and see if they can help, if we cant help try different towns."The judge looks at Tammy. She slams her hammer and says "she is free to go, but if anyone of my police or town people, or even me catch you doing anything to our enviorment including the wild life, you will have to come here again and possibly go-" she pauses "never mind, just dont let me catching you do it again". Tammy nods "You are free to go Tanny is it?" the judge asks. "Yes ma'am" Tammy nods. Tammky walks toward her father and they walk out of the court back to their hide-out after the long day.

Chapter 3: Meeting Jack

As Tammy, her father, and Talia walk out of the court Tammy trails behind to think about what they should do. She hears a voice syaing "Wait! Please stop!" Tammy turns around and sees the boy that she met eyes with before. "Um hi.....?" Tanny says. "Hi" he pants "I wanted to say-" he pants again "how did your house" he pants "get on fire and whats your name?" he asks "Well my names Tammy and my house got caught on fire because of a wild-fire" Tammy answers. "Why?" "Well because i know who did it and i wanted to let you know that hes in jail right now, because of me" he smiles. "ok thank you"Tammy answers plainly.She walks away and the boy says "My names Jack, i go to Panther High School" "Oh cool my anmes Tammy and im home-less so dont go to school and i really have to go im sorry bye!" Tammy runs off disappeering into the darkness of the night. "WIAT! WILL I BE ABLE TO SEE YOU EVER AGAIN?!?!"Jack screams. There was no answer so Jack walks home. On his way home Jack comes across Kayla Rick and her best friend Jessica Ella. "Hi Jackie its so weird meeting you here!!!" Kayla screams and winks at Jessica, Jessica winks back. "Hey Kayla, hey Jessica" Jack says as he walks past them."Where are you going Jackie?" Kayla asks "I am going home Kayla" Jack says. "Aww Jackie can you walk me home? its so dark out here and im a little afraid" Kayla puts on a cute and begging face."Have Jessica walk you home I'm tired and i have a big basket-ball game tomorrow, so i need the rest BYE KAYLA" Jack says annoyed and just walks away. "B-but Jackie!!" Kayla frowns as he walksa way from her ignoring her. "Jessica you know next time you have to like help me ok?" Kayla says to Jessica "Toodles!" Kayla walks towards her home not seeing frigtened at all. "Bye Kayla" Jessica says under her breath. Jessica walks home and mumbles about something.
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PostSubject: Re: Eclipse   Mon Dec 22, 2008 11:05 pm

AWESOME WORK!!! keep writing i'm addicted ~<3
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PostSubject: Re: Eclipse   Mon Dec 22, 2008 11:40 pm

thanks Very Happy the thing is i dont have alot of time to write D: but ill keep trying
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PostSubject: Re: Eclipse   Wed Dec 24, 2008 1:11 am

Oh well. I figured that there is no such thing as writers block, it's mearly a state of mind which you think you can't make up anything. It is basically when your brain believes and keeps telling yourself it has not ideas. WHICH IS NEVER TRUE.So no excuses people XD
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PostSubject: Re: Eclipse   Wed Dec 24, 2008 2:13 am

lol ok xD
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